How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 5


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 6



Energy: (intensity/focus): 6



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 6

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:____29*______
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Beat selection: pretty decent...I would flow to it = good


The Good: I liked your flow and ur voice = pretty good

The bad: track is too short/vocals are a notch too low

The ugly: **HOL UP...Ur 1st line reminded me of something I've heard before...hmmm...the west coast line...hmmm...not sayin u bit anything, jus familiar to me 4 some reason...iono...nothing else really ugly about this except the fact that it's too short


Final Word: This track was decent for what it was. It was too short to fully gauge your flow style/abilities. But, it wasn't bad.

Recommendations: Try to work on riding the beat a little better. Your rhyme scheme made your words fall on the beat, but the beat they fell on made it choppy...It's like the difference between clapping on the up-beat (black folk) and the down beat (white folk) = rhythm...work on that...work on making your rhyme scheme more complex...and, up your vocals volume a tad next time.

*Final Grade:______C+_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9