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This was different ..
It was okay,...not good but okay...
You can elevate on your structure,
make your lines longer and center it ..
You had nice feeling , and good emotion
Just put alittle more effort , and you'll be good
overall this was an okay piece... keep it up 6/10
PS: i needa link to a OM' you have left feed back on
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