I enjoyed reading this piece, there should be more of these in the Open Mic Section because this is the shit people love to read.

One of strongest aspects was emotion, the way you worded everything made us see the emotions and thoughts running through that person's mind. The vocabulary was good, found a good balance between complex and basic which made it interesting and easy to read. Your flow was hot, was definitely feeling it. Imagery was there, liked the story and how it progressed.

Interesting read! Nice piece!

DQ

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