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Old 04-03-05, 04:16 PM   #4
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Odi et Amo
 
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From: Alosta City
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I read it a couple of times to fully grasp the content, to really understand what you were saying here. The way you worded everything, the deeper meanings in such simple sentences were crazy! You made me think about a lot of things throughout this poem, how you portrayed the feelings and thoughts...shit was amazing!

Emotion was dope, the imagery was cool, got me thinking about life, love and all that shit. If a poem or a song gets me thinking, then it must be good! Enjoyed reading this because I like your writing style, it's easy to read and at same time, it's not. Vocab is good, not too basic but not too complex either.

Dopeness!

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