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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

eh blah battle-

Lyrical- you had an alright verse your getting better in your spits.. your punches werent that bad and you had way better vocab...i liked your personals and shit i liked the "he's fuck'n horrible, i Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch ha that was actually sorta funny .. overall and alright verse work on your punches some more

Mix -um you need some work . i thought you could have done alot more with it. but anyways i'll break it down. you need work on your punches you had some alright stuff like the aids line that was a lil played but it was still good. work on your struct. diss on him more though you were talkin bout records and shit... uhh you got a lil lost . next time just stay on who your facing

Vote//lf for droppin a better verse