Thread: CA$per vs Shaky
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Old 04-03-05, 06:06 PM   #14
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Voted For: CA$per

ok this battles gonna go to Ca$per i mean simple as he rhymed he had straight vocab....but here let me break it down so you know i'm not d/r

Ca$per
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Vocab-6/10:this somthin u need to work on and ya drops would be way better....but i was decent.
Punches-5/10 ehh kinda shaky here....nunt 2 special..work on this a lil bit..
Personals-Didn't really have any cut...try working on personals..thats the key of winnin battles
Metas-3/10:you gotta work on metas too man....was weak here man..
enjoyment:6/10:this was an avg. drop i'm used to reading these in here....was straight

Shaky
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I cant really give you feed on ya battle cuz you didn't have rhyming lines......so it was pretty gay..work on writin rhyming disses...cuz that shit was pretty wack..work on that man..and you'll be in buisness

well since i could only really critic ca$pers and he had a straight drop...he wins..

V/Ca$per
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