Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

not a bad battle, both people came out decent.

warrior. not bad, thought you had some decent lines...opener was kind of stupid, then the 3rd could have been worded better because it was a nice punch, i thought. i think your 3rd bar was what changed my mind, you really fell off on that one, and if it was better, i think you would have taken this one, because your finisher was hot, even though the structure was off and you spelt 'ripped' wrong but keep at it, you seem like you have a handle on battling.

kin*ethic*, hot verse man. you really know how to use multies and that added alot of effectiveness to your verse, but dont get caught up with always using multies because they can dry up pretty quickly and they dont win you battles. i thought you had good metas, great creativity, good wordplay. i was laughing after every punch. some criticism though, dont put all those lines and crap in there, its very distracting to the eyes, and it is just stupid, but overall, you won this

v/kin*ethic*

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