Voted For: Judicial

Judicials verse

it seems like you were going at your full potentiol on this battle, like your style though, and it was pretty much one sided.. structure was kinda off but vocabulary was decent and made up for it... not really punches in there but it was still impressive and kept me readin..
OVERALL 6.5/10

Sabre's Verse.. I'll break his down..

record of 6-1, but any skill from you has yet to be seen
finally got time to battle, get permission from the queen?
^umm... what? 3/10
what are you 13, a wife on the net, well man, i hope shes a dandy
adopt a kid in africa, send over a computer, then you have a family
^again... what? 3/10
but seriously, when it comes to battling, youre just lost in the fog
the only vet youll ever battle, is if the clinic kills your dog
^4/10 but too late to have a good punch

overall your verse was kinda wack.. no hate, your punches seemed like they were supposed to be funny but they were stupid... no hate again... and your lines were strecthed but your structure was better...

OVERALL 3.5/10

I have spoken... Wordness...

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