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This was an okay drop you need to work..
More on feeling the concept, and usuing more feeling ,
Learn to make the reader keep wanted to read your drop..
You can also work on using alittle imagery ... show some emotion.
But its was a cool peice i liked it ...keep it up
and hope to see another drop from you soon.
Ps: I needa link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed
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