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WOW! im surprise this hasent gotten any feed back yet?..
This was a nice peice i really injoyed reading it ..
You had a nice concept behind your piece..
You picked a nice topic to write about...
You had nice word play, nice use of vocabulary...
you can work alittle on your structure , but overall nice drop
keep it up hope to see more from you
Ps: I need a link to an OM' you have left feed back on or this will be closed
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