Voted For: MaRVJay1009

alright, marv got this one.

cinema, your stuff was way too basic, nothing special really, try to spice up your lines with some humour or something, be witty about it, you just come straight to the point, elevate vocab, get creative with wordplay, also, you say nigga too much, get that outta there, dulls your verse and makes you look bad

marv, had some nice stuff, creative, complex, yet effective, some lines were played, like the closer, but you still had enough to beat him, you're a decent textee on this site, keep up man

v/marvjay....RTF on the link in my sig please.

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