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This was a pretty nice peice... i was really feeling it ,
Structure was alittle messed up though, really needa work on that...
Try to match your lines up, cuz some times it throws the reader off..
You had lots of feeling and Nice emotions on this drop..
Really was nice , just elevate on structure and alittle bit on wordplay..
and you'll be fine ..keep it up
Ps rop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed
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