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Old 04-04-05, 02:56 AM   #8
Spektikul
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Voted For: Limited Edition

This battle was pretty terrible...
I never really think 6 lines are enough to get out what you wanna say.
But anyways, both of you kinda used a bit of self-glorification...which in a 6 line battles takes up room and is unnessacary. Adrenaline had the personals, Edition had the punches. Both of you coulda had better structuring, vocab, and use of multies and metas. I wasnt really feelin either verse, not to be a jackass or anything, but both of yall know that neither of your verses are anything to be proud of. However, there must be a winner and I was definatly feelin L.E.'s verse a bit more. Adrenaline, only your 2nd bar is the best you had and not much at that. L.E., you actually threw punches in your 2nd AND 3rd bars...So my vote goes to L.E. for bein more consistant with punches.

BUT ONLY IF YOU RTF IN MY SIGGY...

V/L.E..................

PS - RTF now or Ill remove my vote. No hate, just do it. Peace.