Loving the concept, don't think it has been handled before on here so props for that. I enjoyed how you worded everything and how the story progressed, feeling the ending a lot. Your vocab was impeccable, found a good balance between basic and complex which made it easy to follow. Had your flow on lock, structure was okay and the imagery was nice. The concept is so good and the way you worked it out, so detailed, was amazing!

Great piece!

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