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Old 04-04-05, 11:23 AM   #7
Ethnic
...You worth only one bullet...
 
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This was feedback posted for MaD_KnighT

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so lets see....this not poll battle but i leave my feedback......
Hulk:independant lyricist you dont want no parts of this
ash to ash burn ya ass rest in piece says the arsonist
give the mad knight a chance to breathe on it
wrap his body in a blanket pour gasoline on it
since thi knight is mad i must be fucking insane
sitten in a hospital bed wit IV getting tuck in ya veins
omg.....not very hard punches,flow ok,structure omg..
elevate......you should make longer lines and write them more.....but that same was with thug too but he even has 8 lines you only 6......

thug:Yo Yo Yo

Look dis is ridin on fukin hulk's back/
The Hulk is green,I bet dis bitch is black/
How da fuk can u hav an idol dat turns fukin green//
Dis bitch cudn't builded up enuf energy 2 even sound mean//
Y cum try beat me down, u cudnt even back a drum/
All lil bitches from Philly get drunk of 1 glass of rum/
Oh fuk dis shit i'll have hulk as an enemy//
Cuz i know i'll win cuz dis bitch sucks at delivery//

some hard punches...i really like that green thing....
lot better verse than hulk.....more personal......
you should make too your lines longer and more them..
but better than hulk........

Vote:thug
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