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Old 04-04-05, 05:34 PM   #18
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Voted For: Lion King

lion king takes dis battle imo....he had the better more creative punches but those masterbating lines r startin 2 get played but dis 1 waz good.....all the inbetween talk isnt need either.....
casper your verse was too simple...too basic...u need 2 throw in sum flava and complexity in your verse n u will be straight....
lion king u need to work on your structure and dont put da verse lookin like a paragraph n shit...u might get a dumb ass who cant break down the punches and what your trying to say...but this was a straight battle...

v/lion king

return the favor...me vs. sabre.....i was up 1-0 but dqed so 0-0 jus vote on da ~1~

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