Voted For: warrior

warrior took this battle in my opinion.....they both came decent but warriors structure was better and easier to read....he also added more creativity to his verse...kin ur verse it was like good but like didnt do it for me..its like ur words barely rhymed at sum points......just get ur structure better and re-word ur verse a lil bit and u be straight.....yall should do a re-match when you get ur shit fixed up

v/ warrior

return the favor for real yo.....
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