aight sorry on the delayed feed cause u left feed a while ago on my shit so here goes... im listening.......


Flow is ok but choppy... its not bad... vocab could be better... the deep voice thing is ok but gets annoying after a while. all in all this was better than some of your other stuff so i think your showing signs of elevation and in time u might be aight... im guessing it was a custom beat u made so props on that.... all in all its a 4.5/10 but thats not a bad thing because your improving and thats always good... so stay up kid 1