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Old 04-04-05, 07:14 PM   #15
Dabatos
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Voted For: Kesse

This was a very good battle..

kesse.. Whoa!! You hella surprised me with your verse.. I really thought u were gonna come weak but surprsingly you came hard as hell.. This by far is your best verse yet.. You have very good vocab on here, and a pretty good storyline connecting it too life and how good fortune blinds us... Thats something I wouldn't even thought of doing.. well maybe if i tried but i barely do lol.. your structure was pretty nice.. and your flow was on point.. but nice job..
9/10

Flow:
Alright man.. you sorta dissapointed me on this one.. the beggining was sorta weak, but still had pretty good vocab... unlike kesse's... you had way better imagery because you drew a picture of you being in that corner begging for money wen he just talked about how we are blind... your's really wasn't that creative as well because this is something I would of done.. yeah i know you said you had 50 minutes to do it.. (oh n nyce job by the way for doing a good verse within a short time..) but it just wasn't as creative.. The best part too me basiclly was your last line..
8/10

Vote: Kesse
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