.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
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This was feedback posted for Lion King
IP:
lion King
The Chances Of You Winning This Battle Are SLIM Like FEMINE BITCHES THAT's PETITE
Your Done & Wrapped In WHITE SHEETS! Cause CASPA's GHOST Like The KKK With Its BURNING TECHNIQUE
^^^ Like da opener iight punch
FUCK IT YOUR DONE... Well BLAH U SUCK IM NOT TRYIN
Eattin Lion King For Beef? Nah Dawg You Can't Like ISLAMIC BELIEFS! You Wack Nothin Bout You Is Unique
Beat Ya WORST THAN COPS Since Ya HAUNTING THE STREETS & ROAST YA ASS HARDER Than GRILLIN YA TEETH
^^^ O.K pretty good line
Last Bar...YAWNS
Believe Me This Is Just TARGET PRACTICE...Cause LION BREAKS MORE BONES Than ACCIDENTS In GYMNASTICS
Honestly Your Not Gettin Passed This...Cause I Got This PUPPET BEAT Like STRINGS Layed MASTERBATIN On A MATRESS
^^^HA HA i llike da last line w/ the puppets n shit
lion king
pretty nice verse
sum of ur puches landed and i liked em
work on elevatin sum more
u r a newb so there is much room for improvement
pretty good kid
Ca$per
alright u aint a lion your more like a cub.....
you couldnt be one if you joined the lions club....
^^^NO!
and your really not fierce,u more like a bitch....
and u fukked up son,u on our snitch list......
^^^O.K Line
im done now before you get up my temper....
lionz r supposed to roar,your more like a whimper....
^^^Ummmmmm........MEH
sad ass verse homie
i kno we crew so ima break it down like dis
weak rhymes
work on ur word choice
i kno u betta den dis
i seen sum of ur otha battles
it seems like u really aint try on dis 1
datz iight doe
i kno u jus threw dis 2getha
elevate sum more homie
u betta den dis
CHEA!
VERY SAD ASS BATTLE CAN'T VOTE B/C OF CREW
IF I CUD VOTE MY V/LION KING 4 COMIN HARDER
ay cud u check out mah battle vs. .mixtape.
i need 1 more vote 4 da win
he needs 5
vote 4 whoeva u thought won
PEACE!
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Niggaz Get Frustrated Losin' Ta Me!
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