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Old 04-04-05, 09:58 PM   #12
Wickedclown
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Voted For: ...Voke...

aight well... this battle was good... i liked it... here is my break down....

Voke- ya shit was dope... this was the only audio on ya page... is it ya first? cause it was pretty dope... intro was kinda weak.. aight flow was great throughout the whole verse and never fell... you had good mic presance and you spoke well... lyrics were good but u should try to use bigger words so up on vocab... overall imma give this a 7.5/10 good shit kid

this line owned him :

rappin about tha queen and tony blair aint flyin this time


Acuity- ya shit was actualy pretty dope... this is prolly one of the best ive heard from you i liked it a lot... flow was good... your accent usualy takes away from ya shit but here it wasnt a factor, you pronounced words quite well... vocab was good so no work needed there... now the only down side was the fact that this sounded like a topical dude... didnt really diss him much... now if this was just a song i would say it was pure dopeness but since its a battle... imma give it a 6/10 and thats no hate man

by the way your closer was dope


aight well imma give this one to voke... sorry acuity... ya shit was dope but just wasnt good for a battle.... no hate at all kid

good battle yall


VOTE- VOKE