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Old 04-04-05, 10:13 PM   #2
Kawn Flixx
FUCK STROBE
 
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Well... sorry to say but your wack...
Your structures horrible , no punchlines
No hot shyt , everything pretty much dragged
use better wordplay, and up your vocab ,
overall keep it up but never diss rv ...
5/10

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