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This was pretty good, its decent
Not the best that ive read but not the worst either...
Your wordplay was okay but enxt time try to use bigger words...
Try to use alittle more emotions and feeling ...
your structure was good , and really easy to read
overall keep it up, and elevate you'll be fine
Ps rop a link to an OM' you have left feed back on or this while be closed
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