Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

This was an okay battle seen alot better both structure's were horrible but okay..

Kin:
Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
Okay opener, could have been better
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| .. Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
Okay, decent
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|
Nice closer ,

Overall this was a decent drop , seen you do alot better around , but it was enough to win this battle, elevate on using bette punchlines and try not to stretch your lines..

warrior
u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
Not feeling this
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
Not feeling that
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
Okay
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.p[/b]
Prety weak closer

Overall it was a pretty weak verse, and kin took this one hands down , elevate more and keep at it

Vote- Kin

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