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This was a really weak peice...
You need to elevate alot more , on how to make bars
not just little lines ,
You need to learn how to put feeling in your written , and
Make punchlines and learn to use creative wordplay, and vocab
overall this was weak and you just need to elevate
Ps rop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed
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