Voted For: the metaphor

meta tok this

overall i thought metas verse was better it was more focused overall and had some good punches...one thing though put some multies in your verse ..but otherwise not a bad verse
hang man you need a lil work youi have the concept you just don't have the right vocab for it i suggest you go back and practice some ..

both of you even up your structs and up your vocab

vote//the metaphor

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