i like this beat. the chorus is simple. u used a mayor line that was biten. ur flow is aight in this tho. vocals are too low. reall basic. but u kinda drop ur flow in this. ... DONT SEND THIS TO DRE! he will piss on this. no disrespect, you got my props for this bein a descent track but it aint professional. but the best shit i heard from u yet. i think after 20 g dissed u . u could actually knock him back with it if u came like this. keep droppin. work on gettin ur lyrics a lil more intelligent tho. cuz u got a good presence.

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