i like the first beat. the second beat is asssss. shoulda kept the first one rollin the whole way thru. but lets get into it. the intro was gaaaaaaaayyyy. take it out on the reel homez. an intro is like a first impression on the rest of ur tracks. so u gotta shine with the beginnin. the first dude had good presence but was below average when it comes to lyrics an flow. the lady mix up gurl has good presence. i like ur voice alot. chorus i actually aint feelin. get jizzed? seems kinda gay to me.. all in all i dont think this track was n e thing amazing. i mean for havin 10 peeps on it i would think that at least 3 peeople would shine over the rest but to me it just seemed kinda... blah. when a diff person cuts in it kinda sounds like u didnt mix it rite. some ppl were alrite but for the most part this was just adverage in my eyes. u done better...

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