This was feedback posted for Kesse
IP:
I gotta give this to Kesse. nice punches overall. you started to fall off though at the end. work on better wordplay and throw in a few multis. i didnt like the poncho line. you just stated something instead of makin it a punch.
escolayde wanst a bad verse, but your punches were kinda weak overall. you stated more than punched. personals were weak, especially the elevate line. work on some wordplay and your punches actually being punches and not statements.
vote- kesse (if i could vote)
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