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Old 04-05-05, 02:53 PM   #25
Prez.Sence
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Voted For: da Illest!!

Regis, bad punches and bad personals. all you did wuz state, you didnt make it a punch. work on your punches and personals. only decent line was the first one. your retarded line didn't rhyme.

da, not a good verse either. your punches were weak and i didnt really find any personals. your metas were bad, and your multis were forced. work on your basics before tryin more complicated stuff. you insulted yourself with the newb line.

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