Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Build A Rhyme..Cuz I Could Tell U Aint A Lyric Child..
And Ill "Salute" U Da Loss..And I Don Think Da "Military" "Mindz"..
-Nice opener with a personal punch


Treat Him Like A "Fetus"..U Need Anotha "Hole" To Rest In?..
Had His Shit Pre-Written..Dats Y He Was So Swift To Check In..
-Personal with a punch


Him Winnin Is Rare..Like Loyal Preist Thats Strapped..
And B..Im The "Military" "Minded" One..U Should See The Wins "I Rack"(Iraq)..
-nice wordplay with a punch


U Da Best?..I Highly Dispense From That..
Flowz Said Only "Ill" Heads In His Crew..I Guess He Meant "Mental" Cats..
-hahah good decent personal punch


We Cant "Hang"..With Newbies..Like "Killin" Children On A "Vine..
I Role With The Full "Click"..But He Just Role With "Mili" On His "Mind"..
-Decent closer nice punch


Ok Nice verse here mane, punches and personals were connecting good. The flow was ok, put some multi'z next time. The punches and personals is what stood out in your verse, decent with the wordplay too.





On da real hommie,ya raps bunch of jokes like warner brother
On stage and pulled off a 'B-Rad',I tryed to warn-the-brother
-Using the same rhyme at the end of the sentence kinda whack, but its a punch


Part of the lyrical saigonz?,no wonder that crew is so wack
Break it down stat by stat,plain N simple 'the verse' is what ya lack
-Ok a punch, but kinda weak effect in my eyes


And when it comes to punches,ya always have 'etchnical' problems
Like mike jones he gives away his # to labels but they never call him
-hahah good decent punch lol


Ya battle stats has a 'virus',since its 'invested' with newbies
So really he aint hard he's more like 'soft meat',he's all 'chewy'
-good personal wiht a punch


The lastbar isnt a thing for skilled rappers,so go get a ghost writer
Cuz slobk verse couldnt 'hangover' mine if he pulled a 'all nighter'....werd
-NICE CLOSER


Nice verse kyleon, started weak at first, but then you pulled yourself up...........Punches was hard hitting, flow was ok add some multi'z also.

Overall=This battle was close both head's spitting some hard punches. Flow need some improvement from both of you. Ok slobk you had personals with punches which made your punches actually decent and much effective. Kyleon your punches was good hard hitting and effective. But i'mma have to go with Slobk, cause his punches came harder in my opinion, with some decent personals. Kyleon your punches was hard hitting but it werent no match for slobk's punches with personals. and wordplay

pz

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