this was dope man...finally a piece that has some kind of depth to it...i loved the imagery on this...and your comparisons that you stitched in there...also..your syllable count, as well as flow and everything that goes with..was really nice..you said what exactly what you wanted to say..without sacraficing anything for it...this was real good...

if you have time..return the feedback...on either..."leavin me" or "before eden" or both if you'd like...thanks

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