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Old 04-06-05, 12:51 AM   #6
Dabatos
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Listening to song right now... The beats okay.. I don't really like it much cuz its not my type... The first verse is okay.. sounds like first emcee is bored while he is rappin his lyrics.. so like it seems sorta bored.. the chorus is okay.. but seems sorta dead still.. The second verse is getting better.. This is a verse i'd expect in a south type song.. but once again i don't like these kind of songs.. The 3rd verse is the same as 1st.. just seems pretty dead man.. sorry its okay.. the vocab is way too simple... and what you writtin about is somethin way many have wrote about.. try writtin bout somethin new.. 4/10..
others may like it.. jst ain't my type..
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