Voted For: ~High-Dro~

Chowie Chow

You betta pull up yo panties and grab ya purse, DIVE into hell becuse your going to be drivin back home, first class in a new hearse.
^good opener

I'll have you runnin faster then diarrhea, shooting out of my ass somewhere DOWN in SOUTH Korea.
^hmmm, not really feeling it but was decent

Your just like a little school boy, just waitin to get fucked by Micheal Jackson, FALL into your deep dreams man, keep on hopin...its going to happen...
^okay closer

Okay verse here, had some good punches, not always that creative though but they were aight. Try to get some personals in there next time though and fix your structure a bit. Flow was good though as well as your vocab...no hate...

~High-Dro~

your family will celebrate this date of your death like it's a ceremonial occassion
ashamed cuz they don't know if you're a brand of dog food or an immigrated asian
^haha, funny opener

your lack of creativity leaves homies despondent, thinkin "chowsa"
my textual precision will burn ya like fire from the jaws of bowser
^bit self-glorification in second line but first one was nice

you steal more from aftermath than that homie who snatched buck's chain
ya future career will consist only of "squeeks" like donald duck's fame
^lmao...nice...

Nice verse right here! Stayed consistent with the punches but those personals is what did it for me! Damn, had some good creativity in there, nice wordplay. Flow was dope, found a good balance with your vocab and structure was just fine

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