Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Not a great battle.

Untraceable:
You rely on vocab WAY too much. It does not fit your verse, and also throws your flow off completely. I don't feel any frustration in your verse either. Your flow fell off completely in one bar, and that hurt you. Your complexity wasn't as detailed as Era's either. Overall, your verse is ok, but I think you need to not worry bout vocab and work on your details.

Era Zistibul:
This verse's emotion isn't that strong, but I can see and halfway feel the frustration of the kid. Your vocab was a good blend, and it didn't throw off your flow. Your flow was pretty good. Not much of a twist on the topic but I like the Frustrated, Frustrated.... part. That pretty much won it for you. That just sets the tone. Work on your imagery and workin in some multis.

Overall, both of you need to work on your imagery. UT, put more time into the verse and Era put more time in imagery.

v/ Era Zistibul

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