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Old 04-06-05, 03:06 PM   #45
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Ok battle.

King Solo:
Weak beginning, but you got better as you went along. Your metas were a little weak, but your punches made up for it. Not great punches, but the wordplay was good in one spot. Work on your flow though. Not that creative, a Cena line is not that strong. Too much self glorifying as well. Overall work on making punches and not self glorification lines.

(Jimmy Pocketz):
This is one of the weakest verses I've seen from you. Metas are played and weak, as are your punches. Really no personals, just wordplay on his name. Your wordplay was decent, but not that witty. Your flow is ok, but that one line I had to re read cuz you messed up when typing it, but that didn't hurt you. Your verse was just too simple and not that creative.

Overall, both of you need to work on better personals and punches. Wordplay on a name is not a personal.

v/King Solo
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