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Old 04-06-05, 03:15 PM   #15
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ethinic- work on your verse .. your drop was far to basic for your own good. wordplay was really bad. you didnt even have any multis or metas or any decent wordplay....

mad_knight- an alright verse. don't use michael jackson lines they are to played out.. gay jokes are for newbs get more creative in your verse.... with your drops... work on your structure more to...your gettin a lil better... but get some personals..

overall MK gets this because he just came harder.. both of you need to elevate
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