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Old 04-06-05, 04:50 PM   #2
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peepin, dont like this slow beat or the opening adlibs but they aint there for n e thing special n e wayz. lyrics is aight. i dunno if im feelin ur emotion on sum partss. flow is on poiint for the most part tho. ur chorus is jus like the one i did awhile ago, word for word at sum parts. but yea, good chorus. i think u spend to much time talkin about how u better than every1 else but never tell us what u got that makes u so unique. n e one can get on a mic n say that they got what every1 else duznt. but u gotta tell us or show us y. no hate on ur track, just givin pros as well as cons so u can keep elevatin feel me? i think the beat is one u can grroove to but it got borin towards the end. it was aight, not ur best. coulda used a better tone of voice or sumthin i cant put my finger on it. but gud shat
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