Voted For: Given Light

Well i felt this was a very one sided battle...

Stanza:

You had good emotion but thats about it, no vocabulary or imagery everything was just put and w2orded so simply. I like your thought pattern behind the verse but overall you didnt bring enough to the verse to make it stand out over GL's.

Given Light:

Your emotion was decent not as thoroughly written as stanza's but not bad either. Vocabulary is what set your verse in the right direction. And you were pretty consistent throughtout the verse.. most people just touch on the topic here and there but you stayed steady throughout. Your imagey wasnt too bad but you werent really desciptive in some spots where it could have been better.

Overall GL gets my vote for being more complex and staying on the topic better

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