Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Lots of similies in here, lots. It made it an interesting verse to read, and seemed a little creative. You had some hard hitting punches, and good flow and structure, which is important for a text verse. Good job, on this verse.

Jimmy you had a good verse, but some of the punches were a little played, and the ones that wernt' you ruined by explaining your punches. If you have to explain your punches, your losing all the possible wit you might of had in your punch, and it ruins your verse.

Vote/ Flow