Thread: J-Rin vs J Dot
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Old 04-06-05, 10:00 PM   #6
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Voted For: J DOT

dot took this one in my book.
rin-u almost had it, because u started off mad dope, but then u started slackin. yo verse started to go downhill fast. u shoulvw just found a good stoppin point and ended it. thats why i couldnt give u tha vote, no consistency.
plus-dot-u came harder wit tha mettas in this one. thats about it. i think this was a lil rushed, but u were lucky to come out on top with this one. not tha best verse i seen from you, but i think you took this one. better structure and better consistency. i think yo had a good opener and closer and body, thats why i gave u tha vote. just a overall better verse to me. no hate to noone in this one, just keep elevating.
v goes to jdot cause he made a better attempt at a diss and i think his was more structure and well thought of.
v/jdot