Voted For: J DOT

J-Rin on the rebound, aint elevated since
13 posts and battling DOT?... I’m not convinced

Meh could have been better

I run thru more emcee’s than hockey rinks, u kids cant jam me
Tryna shoot me like a puck, I’ll take care of yo family

WHAT? flowed abd rhymed nicely though

You’re a weak slut and your speech is played like 2pac threads
Cause when DOT shoot, he’ll dye yo shit like sisco’s head

Not hard but amusing.

So go head and try and play me, u’ll get ya banana split quick
I’m owning you right now cause like a slave u’ll get whipped

Decent but could use a little wordplay

And you talking like you tough, but I see you got no guts
Keep making false moves, you be in a box like pizza hut

Not that bad of a closer.

J DOT
most of your verse I didn't get but your flow was nice. Beautifl structure and rhymes is what made me like this verse and a couple of decent line. Keep it up mayn.


J Dot boy, didn't ya mama tell ya not to talk to strangers/
See, this type of thing will put you in all kinds of danger

OMG.

Mess wit tha real 'J', J-Rin'll put ya life to a real quick end/
Cause 'J' will spot you then 'Dot' ya eye, son, ya won't win

Quit that shit I mean it. Its wack

I'll grab up ya barz an' beat ya wit 'em, except they break/
Like you they frail an' your fake, remake ya rhymes on a take

To be honest that was decent. IF YOU REALLY EVER SAW HIM

Go ahead an' live this beatin,'livin' it live' like that on street-in/
You ain't got no heat heatin', boy, ya rapcareer death ya meetin'//

line was played. Never rush in a battle...

Kid, ya suck harder than a Dirt Devil, ya ain't even on my level/
Ya can't even tip tha scale, hell, ya needa elevate, get a shovel//

Played iight thats quite enough


J RIN fix ya structure and I'm only rating the amount of line I did j dot. Fix ya punchline and quit self glorifying yaself. You just need to get rid of these //... That shit is wack. But keep elevating...


v/jdot with better wordplay structure and punches.
I enjoyed his more than yours J RIN.

RTF

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