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Old 04-07-05, 10:26 AM   #21
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Voted For: Forgotten Flow

FF-I think I was feeling yo verse wayy more. You came with more enthusiam and your verse was more interesting to read. I think you coudlve been more consistent in this one though. The last few lines seemed rushed and a lil off, but thruout yo whole verse, I think yo stayed more on topic, and explained the topic better, and rhymed it and structured it better.
Lungistics-Yo verse was ight to me, but I dont think you took it. You had good structure, but I dont think your verse flowed too good. And it was aslo too un-creative to me, and not interesting to read. I think you should work on that. But other than that i felt your verse was ight, but not winnable in this one. No hate.
overall-I think FF took this one. No hate. I voted for him because he had better structure and flow to his verse, and came more consistent, and had the least amount of flaws in this one.
No hate.

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