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Originally Posted by Effect
Voted For: Linguistics
this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one... I was feeling the other verse because of the structue and boring to read...
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^Yep, youre a dick rider. I dont even think you read this one, cause I didnt see one punchline in either verse. I could be wrong, but why would they focus on punchlines in a topical?