Voted For: Murdz

i dunno...this was kinda depressing to read, because there was nothing funny, or anything, both had a few lines that were decent

illest, not bad, i thought the reason you didnt get my vote, because you just weren't consistent with dissin', like you have a potentially hot line, but then you would but some dumbass filler in that just did crap for ya, like, it looks like you can really get the hang of battling, but you gotta keep a good flow of disses and try to come up with some witty, creative stuff
"Dude you dont spit fire so stop claiming ya raps are da hottest
n da only reason u list ya battles is to track ya losses..."
^ like, if you keep your whole verse like this, like, this was a good line man, best in the battle, but you didn't stay consistent all the way through
"Seeing you quite rapping is wot ima do...its my vision
coz its like ya fucking open mic to me..its "my mission" "
^ example of a terrible line, good playin of his open mic, but its not a diss, and it sucked..........well, basically thats it, alot of your lines had good potential to be decent lines, but you had either poor wordplay or crappy set ups, so i suggest work on those, then get some new creative stuff, and you should be a force, ahah, keep up man

murdz....
"judgin' by your pickin 'an' choosin I'd say you're addicted-to-losin...
...plus your "lines" are so weak Whitney Houston wouldn't use-em*..."
^ best line, this was not your best, i think you've fallen into the multi spiral man, you keep trying to rhyme everything and its taking alot away from your punches.....multies are good, but only if you can use them effectively....you kinda just put them in to get a nice flow....alot of your shit, all it did was rhyme, but i thought you kept it consistent and kept dissin him, which saved you...so my advice, YOU DONT ALWAYS NEED MULTIES TO HAVE A GOOD PUNCH....because if all you're doing is rhyming, then you're not dissing....keep up though....

v/murdz...RTF in my sig

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