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Old 04-07-05, 11:24 PM   #2
Dabatos
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listening.. I love the beat man, very nice, where you get it?? Nice lyrics, and nice delivery so far.. The chorus is okay, but to low of a note, try to do a higher note.. and the chorus is sorta long.. going into 2nd verse.. The lyrics is pretty good, simple but could feel the emotion.. The flow is also on point, but on some parts is only a little off... the song would be alot better if you had better quality, and the volume on ur verse goes up a lil higher..

8/10

plz leave feed in my song..

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