Listening to it right now..

Verse1
The intro is kind of weak, you should come a little stronger to get ppl sorta hyphed.. Your flow is good but off at some places..and sometimes your eating your words alittle..

Chorus: Okay,but not that good...

Verse 2: Carson, you got a pretty nice voice, different from alot like calmity... but your mic is way to quiet.. your lyrics is sorta simple, but its iight i guess... the verse is also sorta short, but just like L.E., your flow is sorta off..

Chorus: Same..

Verse 3: At the end you sorta seem kind of dead man.. lyrics is same..

Improvments to work on: Both of ya verses seem sorta dead, ya sound like you talking, and not showing any emotion.. thats wut most cats got to improve on as well.. so, so far work on that, and also try to think of a better chorus you know..

7/10

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