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Old 04-08-05, 12:17 AM   #4
~Lady Fiya~
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i like how this laidback, and the chorus was very catchy.. ya flow fell off a couple times, but overall nice.. delivery was nice. i was feeling where you were taking the track, lyrically.

"and for you bitch i'll never change" lol

outtro- sounded pretty good, but you were kinda close i can hear you breathing a little.. but i was feeling this most definately. Stay up, kid. 1
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