this was decent but wording i gotta say was a bit off but ya bars concepts were pretty deep...good drop critic...it was short but that didnt really hurt its effectiveness in my opinion...my only quams was that its seemed worded weird at points...almost like you needed better grammar..not sure what more to say to fix it..it not my drop...
but stay up fam...good work...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!