this was kool man, i was feeling ya topic...some lines need a bit more
added to them and maybe ya piece could be a bit longer...but i thought it was koo how ya reflected back on actual events n didnt just talk out ya ass....
i think you'll definately be a decent topical head in the near future if you keep dropping like this......there is room for improvement ...ya rhyme scheme could be
more complex n not so irratic.......but it was a good drop...props

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!